by HeyAll
I have only gotten to the middle of their first session when I post this. Just a suggestion but could you give the MC some informal training, perhaps a friend in high school or he read some books on therapy. There is a reason therapists go to school for so long. Done improperly it can do far more harm than good.
I really liked it. I enjoyed the interaction between the characters. It made me think of my own mother. Thanks for your time and imagination. 5*
Good story as usual, well designed, well told, well written. But, I remember having read the same story here back in 2014, the same year I discovered Literotica.com. Did I miss something?
Damn, dude, you are one prolific writer! I always enjoy the way your incest stories build up in their own sweet time. Keep up the great work!
I am so glad you posted today, just as I was despairing of anything good to read.
Thanks for lighting up my day, again :-)
I also recall reading this once before. I have read enough of HeyAll's stories to believe he had no need to plagiarize someone else's work, so I have to wonder if he is posting the same story a second time for some reason. For whatever it's worth, it was as good a read the second time around as the first.
You are one of my favorite authors and I always look forward to reading your works. Please keep up the great writing. The way you ended this story, I can easily see a second chapter. Please keep up the great work.
So arousing when she was first naked in front of him. When she put her naked breasts on his back I could feel it throughout my body.
Telling of sex with brother was a tender segue with her son.
You just keep on churning them out. Always glad when I see a new story by you because I know it will be very well written to tease and turn on this reader on!!
Loved the story! really enjoyed reading it.. keep them coming
Nicely written and developed. I enjoyed. Very arousing. Please keep up the good work.
You always tell such erotic and well developed stories. Please keep them coming (no pun intended)
I feel it could have been longer, but as always, great work.
but I did enjoy the story in spite of the incest. You do write compelling work.
reminds me of this thing i had with someone who wasn’t my mom but would pretend to be. hot as fuck
You ended with a bang ha! ha! . Again as alway thanks for the great read. A FAN
Complete suspension of disbelief , wow, more ? Best writing style I have encountered.
Great story. Hope u will add more chapters !!!!! Sure everyone would read.
OMG! I could not keep from envisioning my mother in this story! So very well written.
We never did find out who the dad was or why he wasn't in the picture. One line struck me as kind of funny, "She began to make panting noises with her mouth". How else could she have made panting noises? I understand passion sometimes get the best of people, but to stand in front of their window and have sex isn't something a reasonable person would do unless they really wouldn't mind getting caught. Her being a lawyer and doing it was kind of pushing the limits of belief.
First, the consultation style broke about every rule, but whatever. Great story with a lot of loose ends, in particular the tender nipples. Was she pregnant? And was her brother the son's father?
I've enjoyed your stories. You have a good imagination and you write well. Haven't finished them all yet, but I'm working on it!
The mother's mentioning of her biological clock indicates that she wants more children. They could pass it off as the result of a one-night stand and single motherhood is much more accepted than it used to be.
If mommy wears professional attire. Could you please add stockings to your stories. Nothing sexier than a mommy in stockings for her son. Great story. I gave it 5 stars.
Great story consistent with all of your writings. I always love it when the female protagonist is a professional rather than some gutter mouthed trailer trash. I'm obviously not a fan of the vulgar language favored by so many other authors. FYI, the past tense for thrust is thrust, not thrusted
You used a nice concept to an incest story, and it made for a good read.
I'm happy you included the religious upbringing aspect of his mother in such a light as to illustrate clearly, the ridiculous stupidity and harmfulness inherent with children being raised by strict parents that have their heads so far up the ass of the bible, they can't see the light of day!
It is truly an awful shame that this situation is a very real truth. Far too many kids grow up with phsycological and behavioral problems because their parents are too afraid of reality to be able to think for themselves, and believe, and live by, the teachings of the churches.
The overturning of Roe vs Wade is a great example of how organised religion wants to choke and control normal human sexuality.
At least now, his mother is coming out of her shell and beginning to blossom, in large part, because of loving help from a caring son.
Good job, and I hope there's another chapter on the way.
I'd also like to chime in with ToughSailor on the part of not liking vulgarity in these stories. It detracts from the enjoyment of the composition, and typically, demeans and degrades women into cheap trashy cumsluts.
So once again, thank you, HeyAll.
Sincerely,
B4PW.