All Comments on 'Night Dogs'

There's lots going on in this poem. It feels like a mix of gothic and Tom Waits and even Poe. I like the imagery and the human metaphor it conjures. I might edit it down a little to tighten it up, but it's really good. And congrats on the end of the um blockage. :)

damn, that is a piece of work, Sir.

goes so nicely with my current 'black dog, bad dog' theme.

doggy style is where it's at.

This is wonderful, Mutt! Set it to music, it's a winner!

Fly

I love the raw taste and found this had the twists

that make great reading. I like your work when

you construct such a complex marvel with common

words and everyday (or night) topics. sandspike

I've missed ya gorgeous :-)

vivid images make this a winner....*bluerains*

mentioned in Wednesdays reviews

and loved that ending........don

......like an angels hand. Lovely, Mutt! A great poem with some terrific lines.

Tess

very vivid ~ kept wanting to look over my shoulder.......

Very nice. I like the night scene you've painted.

Yawn. Too forced.