All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles Ch. 06'

good read. now waiting for ch7

this is a great series, you are a good writer. waiting for more.

Dude! Too good! 4 words! Me.Ur.Fan.Forever!!

Thnks.

Gregory

Oh come on man, soooo good i was just gettin into the whole thing and you end it this way awww damn lol, GREAT JOB keep it up and keep them comoin

"Golly"

:D

Also: Good story! And great grammar!

Every chapter so far has kicked serious ass...

I don't know what you do for your day job but I have a suggestion for you.... Quit your day job and go write for a living. You are a better writer than a lot of the published authors I have read. Thank you for taking the time to share with us your creations,

Sky.

Your storyline is awesome & I hope the story never ends!

And it has a lot of the guilty pleasure that are like junk food for me in a fantasy such as this.

Well Done.

I like how the story let them actually "discuss" the genie master relationship, her duties and all....

other stories just go over this topic briefly by saying : "look here these are the rules, we can bent them this way but not the other"-end.

although the short chapters still pisses me off.

Wasting that much time with a make-up brush...wtf?