All Comments on 'Naughty and Nice Ch. 02'

by Antonio_y_Cleopatra

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
great story

Exceptionally well written and hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yes please

Excellently written and now a personal fantasy. Thank you for sharing your talents with us

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Spectacular

What a great story! I loved the pacing, the emotions, and the descriptions.

I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing this with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great Story!!!!

I loved all the detail you provided in this story. Keep up the good work.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 5 years ago
I am so glad you are posting again.

This is a wonderful story. The couple are definitely made for each other and you haven’t introduced artificial drama to make the story more “interesting “. The story and characters are strong enough to carry the story themselves. Thanks.

General_OGeneral_Oover 5 years ago
Wonderful

Love the build up and the details of the building relationships great story please more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Young lady

Pick ME!

LilwaynenOrLilwaynenOrabout 5 years ago
Amazing!

All I can say is "damn, please publish anything 4 all to read"!

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 4 years ago
I PICK Young Lady!

Oh, and your story was smooth too!

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderalmost 4 years ago

As a man I really appreciate the way your male character was so open to anal play going both ways, and opened himself up to her just as she opens herself up to him. Very hot and very satisfying.

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I like to read stories where there is mutual respect, trust, and affection between the characters. Some of the hottest stories occur when the characters must wrestle with trust--can they trust their partner with their most personal emotions? There is a trust divide that separa...

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