by sandspike
This flowed really well,
ate more collard greens
than Tiger Woods has seen
raised on Memphis soul
and dry navy beans
Loved that bit!
Good stuff,
Thanks.
~ Jenn
this poem overflows with personality- well captured and presented, sand! I especially like the last two verses, they are really well put together and sincere
~anna
very well here. i like those short quick lines in the beginning. nice lead in to the last two stanzas with that 3rd verse. it speaks volumes......wonderfully written.......don
short brush strokes you always portray such vivid images...love to read your pens....smiling...blue
"Modified for comfort"! What a great line!
Love the anthem for the South, Spike, well done!
Fly
Sandy,
If I've grown, you've grown, too. Is it possible we're getting better with age, darlin'? (Although I think we'd probably be a fine aged malt instead of wine...)
Wonderful work, handsome.
This is too much fun, I especially loved
'contradictions backed
by a heavy base beat....'