All Comments on 'Southern Song Singing'

by sandspike

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Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
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This flowed really well,

ate more collard greens

than Tiger Woods has seen

raised on Memphis soul

and dry navy beans

Loved that bit!

Good stuff,

Thanks.

~ Jenn

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
greens

this poem overflows with personality- well captured and presented, sand! I especially like the last two verses, they are really well put together and sincere

~anna

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
i can hear it......

very well here. i like those short quick lines in the beginning. nice lead in to the last two stanzas with that 3rd verse. it speaks volumes......wonderfully written.......don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Good ole boy.....

...I gotta love this symphony for the south.

Tess

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
in your

short brush strokes you always portray such vivid images...love to read your pens....smiling...blue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Pull up a stool...

"Modified for comfort"! What a great line!

Love the anthem for the South, Spike, well done!

Fly

DustystarDustystaralmost 19 years ago
Karoke Friday night at Sandy's bar

Sandy,

If I've grown, you've grown, too. Is it possible we're getting better with age, darlin'? (Although I think we'd probably be a fine aged malt instead of wine...)

Wonderful work, handsome.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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This is too much fun, I especially loved

'contradictions backed

by a heavy base beat....'

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