That's lovely ~
very sweet, it's hard for
dad's to give thier daughters
away~ I hope she will be very happy!
Very sweet of you to share the photo and experience.
A good clear solid verse
it tells a tale;
not some pretensious piece
masked behind babble and garble;
it's a heartfelt image that we see,
of Mom and Dad left to their lives;
as the young go out to experience the same,
and we do it all, all over again........
I've been so emotional lately and this brought it all right out of me.
a different read from the box, touching~
on a rather unusual topic for poetry. Thanks for sharing!
A look at the lighter side of Box. The scene ~ the daughter's wedding ~ Going from joyous to sadness upon returning home to an empty house. Lovely picture sets the mood.
that lifes put on us. TK U MLJ LV NV
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