All Comments on 'Blood of the Covenant Pt. 02'

Fantastic read, I loved it. Hope you write some more like this thank you.

Man this was a great story. Just a fantastic mix of dramatic, erotic, and romantic. I do have to say that I wasn't a huge fan of the massive time jump. Felt it was a bit too abrupt, choppy even. Think it would have worked better to have the story stay with them up until the move to Washington then skip forward a few years. Would have been a smoother transition and been a lot more satisfying, then the ending would have felt a bit more heart warming after we had been through that big life change with them. More show less tell kind of thing. Course I also just wanted more of the story. As it is I really loved this story, even if I wished I had more time with these characters, so thank you so much for writing it!

So good from start to finish

Thank you for your work. Be well.

I really enjoyed your story a good mix of it all but I really don’t feel it has been finished. I feel there is more to tell with this family but this is you story your characters if you feel they have gone as far as you need them too cool. Good work I will look forward to your next story regardless.

Thanks

Thank you for writing this brilliant story. I couldn't put it down once I started reading it. Looking forward to reading more of your works.

Great story. Not just a good erotic story, great story period. The emotional bit in the middle nearly had me in tears. You balanced an emotional part of the story with some sex that really got me. Looking forward to more stories from you!

Unusually good quality in almost every aspect. Maybe better than that. I'm no writer. Who am I to judge? I'll disagree and say, end it. Maybe I'm wrong. More likely, those who say continue, just, as I, hate to see it end. Now, about deleting bad comments... I'll disagree. Those types will just bash another author, who may wonder, Why Me but not Him? Let them be seen as the universally useless wankers they are. Oh - and I did not find it very dark at all. Some, but a measured decent amount.

I loved almost every bit of it. I could have done without the bit of dominant sex on his part getting off on calling his sister a whore or making her say it just came off as Dickish after building him up to be such a great guy with self esteem issues. But it was easy enough to overlook with the quality of the rest of the story.

Nice and I agree with "shane279"

Wonderful story gets 5/5 and stays in my favourites.

Tell me someone is Banri Eurasian, white mom and Japanese father?

Nowhere in the story are actually told of his parentage. Just his Fathers name, Ryu Igurashi

Anyone know?

5/5

Have to agree with Shane279, not a fan of how Benny degrades his sister while having sex. Otherwise good story. Not as dark or dramatic as the author seems to think it is.

A bit dull, and a lot of stuff felt like filler, mostly the trauma, nothing got resolved he just went to a therapist and the guy(I forgot his name)continued to be a pain and then he wasn’t, pretty much this entire story can be “guy fucks his sisters”, nothing got resolved it just stopped, no marriage, no babies just 20 pages of a guy convincing himself it’s alright to bang family.

... without a doubt!

Riveting, well written, and exceptional.

Picked up early on the alcoholism (sober for 30 years), and the suicidal tendencies.

Sometimes life has its dark times.

Really glad to see a good ending.

5 Stars, for both Chapters, an Instant Favorite for Chapter 1, to lead me into Chapter 2 in the future.

My thanks.