All Comments on 'Sitting In at Blackjack'

That was very, very interesting. Words were great but pictures left too much to the imagination. Even so, I liked it.

Terrific limericking - humorous, yet erotic as the story progressed. No shaming or putdowns, just a loving couple. And through the shadowy photography, the perfect, gorgeous woman to make it believable. Bravo!!

Usually only read a poem when referred to it as a Favorite, as Romancar did.

using limerlick meter unusual, at least to me, and illustrations also very well done

quite long-suggests author has considerable experience, and grammar, etc all spot on

easily a five, and fave

I thought this was excellent. I loved the photos accompanying really helped.

Thank you

This one was excellent. Most creative, and so far beyond the usual 'There was a young lady from . . . . '

The illustrations were great too, but being categorised as an illustrated verse, it unfortunately misses the Loving Wives commentariat. They would have conniptions.

Lue

So Hot, selfishly, I would Love to see with color illustrations or even better, real photos.!.