All Comments on 'The Weapon Cyborg'

I really, really hope this is just the first chapter.

Wow! I’m already drooling for part 2.

You have a great grasp of balancing the heat and the story.

This is going to be epic!

Too bad it is standalone. You gave a view into what feels like a complete world that I would never want to visit. But I would love to read more about it. Thanks.

Thanks for the love, readers.

I'm not against doing a follow-up chapter in the future, but it'd definitely be a long time before I do. MLV is where 90% of my effort goes, and the other 10% is on unique short stories for An Inhuman Love, not sequel chapters. :(

This is a Great start, I'm looking forward to more , just as you don't leave Jack & company I have followed it from the start .

Another 5'*s as usual , but I understand you need a breather from Jack & company

Thanks for the read

txcracker

Annnnd here is another one!

OK, dude, like you seriously HAVE to continue this one! Not saying the other Inhuman Love stories weren't great, but this one is awesome.

This was amazing. Pleas give us many more chapters.

Please consider continuing this story?

Your storytelling sets it ahead of most offerings.

It is a moral imperative you continue this story. They need to rebuild the world.

First of your stories for me. Could use a second set of eyes for editing and polish, but I enjoyed it greatly. Please consider making this a series.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I know a second set of eyes would do my writing good, and I'd love to have an editor that could keep up with my writing pace. But until my Patreon grows more successful, a paid editor is not something I have access to, and so far I have no volunteers willing to edit 60k words a month.

Another great story

djb

This has great potential for a lot of interesting short or longer storylines. Would love to see your awesome storytelling skills put in some time in this arch!

Just found this story while cruising through a list I had. Since I haven't found anything worthwhile that's been posted that's new. I said what the hell why not give this story a chance. So glad that I did it's super sexy and has good possibility of becoming a great series. Hope to see more added to this story in the future so keep up the good work.

Foreskin in the desert? Really?

Semites (Jews and Arabs) are circumcised because of the sand in the desert. How it got to the US and from there over the whole world I dont know.

Well that was exciting! Amanda sounds like a former Marine, Can't wait for more. Five Stars. OooRah!

Brilliant story-telling and the interaction between Tumbles and Amanda is so goddam entertaining - had me laughing out loud. Definitely agree that a sequel would be good. But that will take a monumental amount of effort to be as good as this "one off". It will be worth the wait. Thank you.

Oh fabulous story, love the details and backstory, very well thought out. Hot, sexy and you've really laid down a good bedrock for future expansion, could easy see this being a series of novels :)

Mor plz

Funny und Hawt!

11/10 Glow Rocks!!!!!

I like the fact that Amanda is a nudist. I wish there are more stories with female characters just like her.

Very funny! Tumbles is so sweet. Maybe they’ll decide on a new name for him since Amanda helped him really become a man. New man, new name, seems fair. Love the confusion over the differences in slang. I’d love to see her take down a few Gun Lords, free some slaves, point them toward democracy. You know, the usual hero stuff. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Would love to se more of this story,

you could definitely turn these 6 inhuman novelettes into all stories

This is my favorite so far. I want more!!!!