Wow! Now this is powerful !!
In the second stanza, consider replacing "sits" with "rests".
The pain is gone and the memories linger on. Outstanding. Thank You. Ronnie W.
I like the flow and the way this read, The touching words that I feel from reading this, leaves my mind....no longer there
being farewelled. TK U MLJ LV NV
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