by WarriorWoman
Unbelieveable, this is what makes literotica different then porn, what makes it special.
Thank you.
I love this first time story. One of the best I have ever read. Loving, erotic and beautiful.
Fantastic story. Very erotic, sexy, and loving. Loved the "build-up" to each sexual act. I found myself building in anticipation, too. Very good-please write more.
this is the best story i ever red. wish every woman and man be lucky with a similar experience.
this story was wonderful, romantic and very sexy. The build up was amazingly hot but also tender and loving...please keep writing.
This has been the besy story written so far. I felt like I was there. I hope my first time is half of what was described...It was amazing!!!
was the best I ever read a lot of passion was in this story I hope you publish your novel one day please leave this chapter in it I LOVED IT BRAVO
This is definitely the best one i've ever read. It's not just k sex, this is true love. "fan-fucking-tastic"
This was a very heart-warming story. I loved it very much. You described it very well and with emotions. Keep on writing.
I can never tell whether 'it' happens super quick and then seems to take forever or lasts forever as your work described with all the overwhelming joy you gave us. I guess your 'first time' must have been magnificent from your deeply passionate writing. I envy you. Loved it!
Oleguy
This has got to be the best story I have read on this site. I loved it. Romance, eroticism, sexiness; that's what this story had, and it was perfect.
A couple things - I think you got the names Elijah and Gareth mixed up once or twice? And you kept saying "chocked" when I think what you meant was "choked".
Don't let me deter you, because you are a beautiful writer with some major skill. Never stop writing. Ever.