by AspernEssling
Veran’s voice is so consistent and perfectly suited for telling this tale. He is the perfect narrator. Well done!
I get a big grin whenever I see that you have posted. Great narratives, carefully worked out with lots of attention to detail. Thank you!
not out of the woods yet, but they killed the Count, which if the Izymyrians are still like their previous generations, will be thrown into all kinds of turmoil and civil unrest. Despite that, Veran and the gang still have to literally head for the hills to save their skins.
You entertained with Giedra's recounting of the night strike and you really made me laugh with your the haughty Iduallon remark from Veran of "his face required the attention of my fist"!
What a pleasantly unexpected way to handle Seva and "tame" her by inviting her to join Veran and his "family." Well thought out. Really loved how Yevna and Veran had such a touching moment together. Even the meeting with Guen/Sulcen/Veran was incredibly special. You really unearth some gems with how you write!
A no-holds-barred 5. Excellent!
You're creating such
Well they ARE out of the woods, not that that's a good thing.
You continue to astound and amaze. I eagerly await the next installment.
If I remember correctly, Ferdinand Foch was always in favor of attacking regardless of circumstances, which explains a lot of WWI...
That was HILARIOUS for Veran to tell a very young Tanguiste that if her ears grew too big, he would trim them with his long knife...and she ran off covering her ears and screaming! Typical dad!! Way to humanize it even more.