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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
hunger

I always enjoy your poetry (~_~)

toss the bullet <grin>

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I like it

maybe it could be tighter, a bit cliche in places,

but I like it. Just never tell HER this, sand

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Ambling, rambling

4 a.m. mindset made real here;

A long night of partying

Wanting it never to end

Or a night that won't start

When pursued all alone...

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