by fifty5
So very like a conversation I had with a girl friend. Except her responce at the end was to turn around and say how nice it would be if a guy she liked would treat her like that.
OUTCH that hurt!
I liked the pace and the internal dialog so on the button.
Nicely done more please.
I got the feeling where this was going after about half the page, but then I wanted to cruise along with it to savor the punch line. It was worth the wait. 4*