All Comments on 'Mistaken Identity'

by gymmyt

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jaggers0053jaggers0053almost 18 years ago
good story

but this boy messed up! what he should have done is while his mother and father and himself were standing together sometime the next day he should have asked his father why he stayed in the den all night instead of coming to sleep on the air matress as planned.do this while making strong eye contact with his mother!! lol that would have been an interesting reaction.

nice story,

don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
OK

This story was OK; but somehow your stories are more believable and raunchier when you write from a girl's perspective

However your photo is delicious from MY perspective

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Whew

I can say you can empty my dishwasher any time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nice idea

Why is it when people write storys It becomes like a fishermans tale, things get over enlarged ;) Sometime it is better to keep it short like an advert, and we all enjoy an advert:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Pretty goofy story

Sorry pal...but this story is pretty stupid.

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 18 years ago
Great job!

Great job! I really enjoyed it!

DK30DK30almost 18 years ago
Pretty good but unrealistic

Your writing is quite good but I have to think that a foot long cock in the brown hole doesn't go in that easily. If you're giving a huge member to your character, play with that characteristic more realisticly.

I agree that this story would have potential for a follow-up if the son didn't switch place with his dad. His mom realising what she had done would make an interesting story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
room for further development

i liked it, but i think it could have been developed more, perhaps with the mom getting pregnant, and the son wondering who the daddy was, but a nice story well told i thought

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Incestuos Fire

Do'nt understand the adverse comments. This is one really hot tale of incestuous sex.USA

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
ssimple question

what 18 year old virgin talks like that?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
hot

don't hesitate to continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

14" cock huh? I'm sure.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Attention to detail

Enjoyed, but your math doesn't add up. Mom is 34, and has been married for 19 years, you're just over 18. So, parents got married at 15, she had you at 16? distracted from the story. ijs

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
great until

the gay anal YUK!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What’s brilliant about this story is that it’s very close to being a reality. It’s all plausible. Well written. Part two?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Pls part too. My pecker is begging

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