All Comments on 'Sunday Sex, As Scheduled'

Oh, my gosh, that's great, Paul! What a fun poem!

I like the humor you wove into this poem, especially at the finale! :) Well done with the rhyme scheme as well!

Thank you, Swiftly and Opal! Glad you appreciate the fun humor.

Artistic truth at last! A must-read for my wife! (I know this is a 'fantasy', but my wife actually pretends not to want sex all the time! She even refuses it, at least sex with me). I know from reading Literotica stories that other people have great sex constantly, with everyone, everywhere. This one is great fun, especially for those people, like my wife, who pretend not to want constant, wonderful sex. Great poem (dammit)!

Always a pleasure. More please.

Thank you, Robin and Hawker! <blush>

Such a fun take on the once a week romp - i clapped my hands together and read with a smile and a giggle. I could almost hear You reading this out loud Paul...

Hi, Paul, what a romp! Lots of sexy fun with some great humor and realism thrown in. Excellent work! 5*

Excellent

Reads like a XXX Dr.Suess for adults. Love the meter and the humor.

Humor with a dash of realism thrown in! I enjoyed this very much. I liked the line 'Gripped in the vice of her feminine vault' Never heard it expressed this way!

Note: 'creeking' should be creaking as in the creaking of stairs or bed frames creaking under the undulations of two bodies during sex.

Love your rhyming! Just as someone else said, reminiscent of Dr. Suess...for adults! Great fun, you definitely live up to your playful name!

Loved it more, wishing it was me.

But love is love and lust is lust.

She is lucky to have all of thee.

Sunday or not, sex is a must.

Life keeps us hooked, that we see.

Keep the sex afloat and the love you trust.

Loved the poem, could this be my wife you write about, the only difference would be she would enjoy the hard wood from behind as much as the other way.

once a week, no wonder the results are thus. fascinating.