All Comments on 'Can I ever Heal?'

Damn. Well written. A real tear jerker.

Love. Get your own tree.

fantastic

Pathetic.

An amazing story so well written!

Wow! Awesome!

This is a story that we don't often see. It is believable, gut-wrenching, thought-provoking, and many other adjectives. I am sure that the BTB crowd will be knocking on the door, anonymously, to spread their hate and discontent, but do not listen to them. This is a quality story that they will only be envious of and wish they had written themselves.

This will go down as one of Literotica’s all time best. Needless to say I really liked it.

I also would like to recommend a moratorium on drugging the wife stories. Not sure how this story would have worked without that particular storyline. But a writer of this caliber could handle it, no sweat

Lovely story and so well told.

Personally, I think this story is more suited to the Loving Wives category. Well written. Well done.

BEAUTIFUL, VERY WELL WRITTEN!!

Five Stars.

Wow a fantastic story. 5* this is one of the best on Literotica.

Wow! It is awfully hard to read when your eyes are full of tears. 5 stars easily - one of the best stories I've read here.

Brilliant Brilliant

Awesome ! Really well written!

I thought his parents died.... Did I miss a page because l had dropped my cellphone so many times that it resembles a bag of ice???

In the first few pages, I wondered how you were going to fill 6 pages

But, it was just enough

ONE WORD .......INCREDIBLE!

This is the stupidest story I have ever read. Drugs that turn people into total compliant zombies. And the score is almost a 5? Y'all are seriously dumb. Extremely so.

Outstanding story!

These "drugging the wife" stories never really work and unfortunately this wasn't an exception.

Audrey would be a total mess if she was being overdosed with memory inhibiting drugs. Roofies like rohypnol and ghb cause amnesia precisely because of the extreme debilitating effect the drugs have on the victim's mind (like she was falling down drunk).

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A drug that allows extreme suggestibility, causes complete amnesia, yet has no other noticeable side effects, was so implausible that it broke my suspension of disbelief. It would've been more realistic to just say that Mitchell gave her an evil magic potion!

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How could Audrey act normally at home while being mindfucked and repeatedly raped at work? What about the massive gaps in her memory? What about the inexplicable bruising and soreness from being roughly raped by a large cock? Did Audrey just 'ignore' all the painfully obvious signs that she was being abused at work?

I really enjoyed it. It was a tear jerker at times. I gave it 5 stars for a well written, well thought out original story. It wasn't the usual"Cheating Wives" story normally found on Literotica.

I liked it. Very well written story. Love forgiveness stories that are real forgiveness and deserved.

If your daughter was unwittingly raped several times, will you still love her? If your wife was drugged and repeatedly, will you still love her?

What a story!!!

I surely hope you keep this story going till you answer the question

Can I Ever Heal ????

Really well done; thank you.

It's nice to read a complex, sophisticated and emotionally moving story that is well written. I really enjoyed it.

Brilliantly written, had me in tears. Superb

I stumbled on this on Valentine's Day; thanks for a great story.

I normally don't read stories from this section (NonConsent/Reluctance) but I tried this one and I'm happy and at the same time sad.

A great story and I hope Mitchell lives a long and miserable life in prison. I just hate rape.

Beautiful, so far. Needs an answer to the "Can they ever heal". Strongly alluded to but I would like to see you describe it with the skill you have done with this story. Can't believe I'm buying the amnesia slut drug thing, but you actually sold it with your exquisite description of emotions on both sides. Very well done, Thanks for this! 5/5.

Tears, amazing!

Damn. Heinous crimes, turned into a beautiful story. Excellent writing.

It's melodramatic claptrap. You might as well had voldemort cast a spell or Romulans develop a slut ray for all the realism involved in this story. Drugs like this do not exist. You only created them to provide a rape plot device where the wife becomes a whore another man without the guilt of infidelity. This is nothing more than a thinly veiled rape kink/cuck fantasy that attempts to not incite anger on either end of this who would object. I see through you however. Pathetic

Mitchell's drugs = Martian slut ray.

Mentally retarded idiot author

How the fuck could she do something like that? No one could ever forgive that.

sure they can ...just be in LW story written by the this author

Very deep story, touching me strongly. Everyone needs a tree. Smart, clever, steeped in perfect wording. I'm so glad i read this story. Thank you

I see again that those that don't write and the ones to scream you're wrong. I've never written a story ether; I don't have that talent or bravery to face the inbred knuckle draggers that had to have their kids read to them. You did well, good grammar, good spelling and all that nonsense. good job.

Should be in SciFi. Those imaginary drugs are really something.

Wow.

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Wow! Came here for a lustful story and never imagined I would read something that would tug on my heart and touch my soul. What a great story!

So. Much. There.

Thank you.

A true writer you are, was enough to bring my emotions up near the end, keep writing down ever stop

Again with the drugs...

Still a great story but sometimes your dialog confused me (who was speaking?)

Still 5 stars. Great job

I would like to see you try a different plot with the drugs. Maybe you have. I will keep reading

Wow. Great writing and a great story. Of course 5 stars

Beautiful & somewhat sad story but with the promise of a happy ending. Wouldn’t mind a short part 2 describing the reconciliation. But I’ve noticed, a lot of these stories have the wife being fed drugs. Almost too many. But for the writing & story, 5 stars. Bob

ah yes drugs, the panacea for "innocent cheating".... bah

writing style, sentence structure etc. were good, the story itself definitely too long for what it says

the plot isn't mine, first of all it's always nice to just blame drugs but it's impressive how people just own such powerful pharmaceuticals, especially in huge amounts, for what they cost you could probably get female company much easier.

i mean i know of almost no story where drugs really work as a plot device

It is one of the best stories I have ever read I was angry hated the villain but the love is what made me the happiest the way you crafted the story was fantastic

Thank you

Darren

Would love a second chapter

Sorry but I don’t see why she had to become Mitchell’s PA. No drug would do that. Her husband laid down the law that she couldn’t become his PA. So this is a weak point in the storyline. These drugs which appear to be hypnotic that can control people as demonstrated in this story don’t exist in real life.

Drugged or not don't matter, she put her self i a situation to be drugged and is to blame for that.

Despite omitting telling the truth is a lie.

Great story Loved the ending Five stars. And for you nit pickers THIS IS FICTION AND NOT SUPPOSED TO BE REAL!!

Clearly you know nothing about female anatomy. Sex loosens vaginas temporarily. You need to stop reading porn. Incel idiot.

The commenters who complain she put herself into a position to be drugged, apparently did not read the story. He drugged her coffee at work. Period. It took her memories and allowed him to order her around (suggestion, mind control). He exploited these powerful memory-altering drugs. He raped every day for a number of weeks. She had zero recollection. As such she did not lie to her husband when they argued. He drugged her every time. The rapist planted suggestions that had impact later. Now to be fair, nothing close to that level of comprehensive memory disruption and control, is available in drugs today. But this is fiction and these malevolent, misused drugs are at the heart of the premise of the story. If we accept they exist in the story and are as powerful as advertised, then there is no choice except for the MC and Audrey to reconcile. Anything else, including the husband being unable to heal his broken heart, would be so wrong given all they went though. Good but depressing story

Personally her guilt or innocence is not the issue the things that were done were experienced by both of them getting over her rape and abuse plus the guilt would test the strongest person. And for him the same to put aside all of that anger and bitterness would be incredibly hard besides trying to restart a marriage which is why couples don't do it it's too hard.

Another Bad druging story really ? Its the 3 story i read from you with this Bad drug plot.

There is only one thing that can be said in reference to this long story...STUPID, STUPID, STUPID. I could not even finish this crap. The writer must be brainless. 1/5

Really, really like it

To you “brave” anonymous souls who delight in heaping abuse in the story and author.

READ SOMETHING ELSE. Go read your Rambo revenge stories. Go read your spank stories. Ones that require empathy and thought are obviously beyond you.

Audrey was as much a rape victim as if she had been drug off into the bushes. A REAL man sticks by his wife through adversity.

5*

I truly loved this story. So many stories are filled with hurt and pain it was refreshing to read a second chance ce and love rekindled kind of story. I will admit to tearing a few times during my read. Keep them coming

Just a wonderfully written story. However, in too many stories I've read, the wife's either dying of a disease or from an accident, or is drugged. That being said, the way the story was told, although 5 pages (can[t count the 6th), I'm happy for the reconciliation. In this case, it's warranted. 5 stars Bob

5 Stars, not a fan of most of your work -this story however was aces- the "magic drug" was the only real stretch on reality because although drugs can assist in "brainwashing" someone, it takes extreme measures and quite a bit of time to break the human phycie. Cause in reality there is still no actual Martian slut ray guns......

No, they can't ever heal, and your bullshit totally unrealistic mind control drug doesn't excuse it. After reading the abortion you titles "Blindsided" I decided to give you one more chance, and more fool I for that. What a waste. You need serious therapy.

Una puta historia de mierda en que el imbecil cornudo le perdona a la pendeja, esa perra se merece la muerte y ahroa sacan la excusa de la droga, no jodas.

Whatever else may be said about the story, anyone who thinks the right combination of roofie and special K can't cause loss of memory and complete compliance has no idea about pharmacology or neuroscience.

How the bad guy became a wizard at the combination I do not know, except that the story implies he had lots of practice.

In any event, thanks for a story about what seemed to be a horrifying betrayal, but in the end was not. Well done.

I'm not reading any more of this ridiculous bullshit. Maybe if it was the future or some sci-fi plot but this is the most unlikely, unrealistic plot I have read. This is worse than the magic slut ray drugs. Every last detail concerning the drugging, the rapes, the continued behavior, the no communication, all of it is so impossible that suspending disbelief is out of question

Anonymous, i am a nurse and a therapist who deals with adult victims of trauma and violent crime. It's bullshit. You just want it to be true because it gets you off.

Very emotional story. When a story is this over the top and emotional it needs the Saddletramp ending.

5 stars again…

You never name these wonder drugs that turn people into sex slave zombies and eradicate memories completely. Why?

Because they do not exist, simple as that. But they enable the author to write such over the top stories and then contrive a RAAC, yes a RAAC!!!

Quite pathetic really.

You are a decent author you do not need contrived plots to create a good story. Try it sometime you might amaze yourself

1/5

Please make another part to this

What is three statements sum up this story? If YOU replied:

1. "cheating WHORE wife Apologist"

2. "RAAC" and

3. "psycho-babble"

then YOU understand this story completely AND understand what this CUCK writer's agenda is!

Ya did this story already. Same failure.

I'm with Wargamer this one, what are these mysterious drugs that create zombies? Seems just a bullshit excuse for an eventual raac.

To those that want the names of the drugs and similar "proof" lighten up folks it's a story, fiction!

Obviously too many readers are hurting themselves and want every story to BTB.

Well done I cried. I would have liked a happily ever after kind of an epilogue. one that talked about it not being an easy road back but worth the journey.

This is a reread for me. It still impacts me greatly. Thank you for your work creating such a powerful piece of writing.

sadly,i'm sure there are drugs like the one[s], mentioned here . very possibly used to treat ptsd and other emotional traumas . how we treat those with emotional traumas can save their sanity and possibly their lives . misuse of drugs has been around for probably thousands of years .

lazy plot devices and guessing maybe one of the first stories if u had an editor fire them lol