All Comments on 'Who Watches the Watchmen Ch. 09'

Thanks for this Aurelius. The other writers you mention, who have written continuations on your original story have totally destroyed the characters fabric and made it scalascious and it was certainly no fun reading them.

Delightfully sordid and arousing. The writing is first rate, too. Glad to see you back at the keyboard, aurelius1982. I hope the is more to come. 5*

This was deliciously debauched and worth the long wait. Wanted to get my praise in before the inevitable army of Incel trolls descends.

keep going..... never stop.....send her to dara village... make her bear a child from dara

Welcome back. I have been a fan for years.

Welcome back. I have been a fan for years

Good to see you back ...and excited for Menaka's journey as Dara's wife.... keep writing....you are the best desi writer around...

Thanks a lot @aurelius1982 Welcome back. It is a treat to read your stories. Please keep up the good work.

Welcome back. Hope you are here to stay for a good while. Quite a few of your stories could do with an update. Thanks 😊

Share the same sentiment as other readers - good to see you back! Look forward to the next chapters in the “The Kaftan” world as it is something we all are waiting for!

Curious to know what happens to the ladies whoes Videos gets leaked. And become internet sensation.

Welcome back.. happy to see you !!! but my worry is lock down is over !!!

Welcome back and congratulations on ur 50th erotica boss!!! What a wonderful closure to the story hope to see ur new work soon....

THANK YOU A MILLION TIMES.

AM A FOLLOWER FROM TIME YOU STARTED WRITING

YOUR EVERY STORY HAVE READ MULTIPLE TIMES

LOVE.

Yes like the author said in preface less sex and more context based but essence of this story particulary about menaka's sexuality .It's like menka sexulaity jumped from 10 to 40 suddenly. If there are any othe chapters make sure how she enjoys sex (like she said about holding back).

Thanks a ton for coming back & relighting our mundane life

When prakash hooks up he make sure that there is no harm to family and their position bin society. Also he never kept any emotional connection also with his hook up women. But menaka is doing a dangerous play. She can not put blame on prakash for this. She have a son who is growing in the same society where she is become a slut. Also she never bother about the pain and humiliation of her son and husband in society. Also she have a emotional connection with dhara. Prakash need to divorce her as early as possible.

hail caesar :) I'm glad you're back. Hope this shitty pandemic's been kind to you. Be well, and as alwasy, I look forward to your work.

Appreciate you writing and sharing your world again. Hope you continue on. Eagerly, but patiently, waiting on seeing how you continue some of the stories like this or bring in new ones!

Too hot really.

Hey,

Love your stories and loved this 9th part. Just your understanding of what a woman feels is really nuanced and I really connected with her.

Thank you so much.

PS: will there be a part 10?

Welcome back king. This is the kind of quality writing we've come to expect from you. 5 star material all the way. Cannot wait to read what happens next

Aurelius has outdone himself with this masterpiece. Only gripe was the length (too short). Although, you can never have enough of his writing. So any length isn't long enough

Pls Continue on next part. Waiting for adventure of Sex and good Dialogues

Is next Update going to come after 1 month? Just want to know the posting gap you have for this restarted series

Glad to know you still write.

Perfect. So you in this update Aurelius. Please do write more. you can start a new story and with new protagonists. One small requests, please make Menaka wear sexy sarees below her navel with skimpy blouse now. Rated 5 stars

Update soon boss. Don't wait for next few full moon

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Don't delay for so long. It kills the charm of the story

Ignore few users demanding to post quickly, pls post as and when possible

Next Update when do you have plan?

Nice one continue

Next update - after next 7 years?

If you don't bother to reply to your viewers, why do you restart the series?

Dead Series?

wonderful to see the story continue onwards. Let us hope to see some dedicated raunchy sex with dara and his new wife our prim but sexy bhabhi menaka. This definitiely calls for a wedding ceremony, a hot honeymoon, maybe a MFF threesome culminating in a welcome pregnancy by the time 3 months are done.

As one request please keep the focus of her surrender to Dara. The flock of other men reduce the intensity of her turmoil and become distractions. They also make her a common and coarse whore, not a beautiful prize to be won and then defiled in private for her and Dara's enjoyment. Menaka needs to be conquered sexually and emotionally by the watchman (in every way) - not made to become a simple street whore for multitude of random men

Dude, plzzzzzzzzz.... continue with the series..... it's the only exciting thing happening. The economy is rock bottom and life's overall pretty much depressing.

What happened Yaar? When next update will come?

ABSOLUTELY RUBBISH, LOOKS LIKE HE IS READING LOT OF SHIPRAT STORIES, YUCK

No response what so ever from Author..... So lets move on.

This small update does not deserve anything.

legend is back.. Keep going my man..

bro pls update Watching My Wife Find Herself Ch. 02 also if possible.. Plsssss...

For the next part: please focus on Menaka’s relationship with Dara. You can write it in a third person narrative - their two months in Delhi. Make herself completely surrender sexually and emotionally to Dara. Pregnancy would be hot.

Dead series.... What a waste of time commenting

nothing to read here....Lets move on from this.

Ran out of ideas? Do read other authors posts...

Write more about dara and menaka current apartment daily life and pregnancy

I think the author had lost the track , better strat a new series, will wait for it

"Merchant navy wife fucking driver/guard when husband is away" ....... nothing came up on Google search 🤪

Dead series....

pls stop writing...Don't make readers fools by publishing an update after so many years with no follow up

Thank you for this update it was a dream come true for all of your devoted readers and fans of your great work my email is browndope@hotmail.com

I hope you continue the story more I was wondering if you had a chance to read any of the fanfiction continuation of this story as well Indian wife place with construction workers I thought the way you ended the story here was a little similar to wife and construction workers nothing wrong with that when I read your story I picture sonarika bhadoria as the female lead I was wondering if you could make a story about her and her stalker ordeal of her personal life that semi interfered with her acting career if you didn't know there was a stalker on her WhatsApp account please email me let's connect thank. You again

Thank you for this unexpected return it is triumphant I encourage you to stay pull up a chair find the typewriter and let us go on the journey with you wherever your imagination let's us being a huge fan of yours and I was hoping I wasn't late to the party I have some great suggestions and ideas browndope at hotmail dot Com we should connect I live in Canada I was wondering if you had the pleasure of reading any of your fanfiction from other writers continuing your story while you were on hiatus you in particular have a talent when it comes to Indian families and cheating wives some of your stories are absolute classics that should be forever remembered and cherished perhaps even made into a web series I digress..

One suggestion I have is if you could do a story on a movie Star sonarika bhadoria I'm not sure if you ever heard of her she made a name for herself doing mythological television series and broke into doing movies and music videos as of late she had some stalkers in her life one in which you could find on Google had her WhatsApp number she called the police but it was over 7 months as she described harassment but let's use our imagination of what we think really happened since details are mostly unknown it still baffles me how he was able to obtain her number either he use magic or he's an incredible hacker or she's a who're that he was able to ci D someone that knew her I encourage you to check out the details and I wonder if you could write a story similar

Keep up the great work my inbox is always open you're more than welcome don't hesitate to get at your boy

Cruel joke to readers

Please up date

pls delete your a/c

Aurelius you are a gem! Loved your new story😊

Please write stories more often. I have been waiting for years to read your new stories.

I hate this when people write a story and then doesn't complete it or provide updates as to when will we get the next chapter.

I am a amateur sex story writer myself and there were times when I wanted to complete a story from my perspective when there is no update from writer or we don't see the next chapter for months.

But again that will be my perspective and not the writers.

Well its great to read next part. Hats off to u author. Now really excited how Maneka is saved from becoming a whore. Anyway love to see how he arranges maneka life again. I guess marriage with dara definitely help her to control and I guess pregnancy will cure her. So hope for the best and will be happy to see next part soon

Just finish the part with menaka being knocked up and marrying Dara mate. Would be a good conclusion and you won't blue ball people.

Please I beg you continue Indian wife plays with construction worker

It was excellent till chapter 8, but did not go as expected in your recent chapter. I'd rather see Maneka continue relationship with Dara during day and become pregnant with him.

Anonymous.

Please continue you are the greatest most inspirational author please contact me to chat via email.

Oh. Waited for long long years for the next part.

A few had tried to continue the story. But they are not upto the mark. Thank you sir. You finally continuing the story. Waiting for the next part.

And please forgive me sir for continuing your construction guys story. The previous writers had already messed up that story. Even Those were so tempting to me that I've waited for someone to write new episodes. But when I saw no one is writing, I've started to write in xossipy. But It'll be better if you not read them. And please forgive me for doing such stupidity.

Sir please give the next update soon. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Lot's of love from your biggest fan.

I hope I can read soon about Menaka and Dara's “marriage”, sex life, and daily life. Will Menaka become increasingly tamed by Dara, turning her into an obedient, low-class woman to meet Dara's standards? Or, will she still maintain her upper-class self, but end up relying on Dara to satisfy his desire to conquer upper-class women? In any case, I'm looking forward to a situation where Menaka is immersed in the role-play of Dara's wife and can't get out of it for a long time. I don't know when the next chapter will be, but I'll wait. Thanks for the wonderful chapter.

I really wish there was more of purva in the construction guys stories

Are you serious? Are you seriously taking years to finish writing a smut?

Finish the story you dumb c*nt

Update and finish the series bro. Don't keep everyone waiting

Once Prakash comes back Menaka is carrying Dara's child :P

Seems this story will end like Purva from construction guys. She gets pregnant, move to a different location and doesn't inform Dara. Prakash will raise the kid as his own. You should really bring an end to this

Waiting anxiously for next part. Just don't get over the board and end it like some of your stories which become unbelievable and unrealistic at the end. Hopefully next partSs will be worth the wait

Waiting for 2023

You are toying with the readers of this forum. Just finish the story. Why keep everyone waiting? There are many great authors out there. You cannot match them with your callous attitude

Low IQ poojeet buddy. Hurry up and finish the story. You're not exactly writing oscar winning screenplay here. You're writing smut. Ending this should take two days.

Question.. "Some in a shack, Some in a car. Some in an alley" -- can author or anyone please explain when did these encounters happen to her and by whom ?

Unable to write a new story why screw up this one? Work on something new buddy

When is the next part?

Give us more !! Love your stories

Please post the next part in this series. It's been a long time we are waiting for it.

At least give us an update on when you'll finish this in the comments mate.

Been huge fan please gv a second part of hr life

The story has been screwed

You are really very talented writer,Sir

I am expecting for more episodes fully excited.Especially Menaka and Dara on bed time,full of dust 💞💞🥰🥰,Have a good time,Sir

The author has killed the storyline. Don't expect an update. This is the last update we are seeing. Read stories from other authors. Peace out

Omg you pretentious twerp, giving the story an ending isn’t hard. Stop wasting people's time like this.

Seems she is carrying Dara's child already. Menaka wants to spend time with him before giving birth and then reveal it to her husband.

Please continue I like it

I mailed the author and he told me he would not continue as he felt he fucked up with the latest chapter and people mocked his writing. Apparently, he felt that they were right in their assessment and that he's ashamed of his terrible writing which was bad even by shitty erotica standards. So he'll no longer write again, lmao. Pathetic.

To someone's Question.. "Some in a shack, Some in a car. Some in an alley" -- can author or anyone please explain when did these encounters happen to her and by whom ?

The way I see it, Dara & Banke in the shack, Dinesh in the car and either Muthu or Selvam or both in alley.

For sure will be an interesting read on when & how the car and alley episodes happened.

Continue the next life of menaka and dara

I really want to read about Menaka and Dara private life and a lot of love and scenes ,plz 💓

So far one of the best Indian stories here. Keep up the great work.

didnt care for the last two chapters. I did like Dara taking more and more control over her, Would like for you to c

continue this angle. Have Dara turn share her with others at his whim, eventually turn her out and become her pimp.

Next update??

Why write a story if you can't finish it?

I regret to say that Chapter 9 was a bore and a letdown in all respects. Wish I had never read it

Please complete the story.

So many open plotholes.

What happens next with Menaka and Dara.

When did Menaka have a threesome with Banke and the Postman.

How many more details are hidden.

Most people are giving bad reviews. I, for one, would say this was the perfect ending to the story. I have contemplated what sharing my partner would lead to. And this ending is quite a very credible ending - a woman losing herself in the cycle of sluthood, and maybe eventually leaving the man who let her be free for another man with whom she has now built a strong, not just sexual, but a mentally stimulating connection. She is actually much, much, much closer to Dara than to Prakash.

The author is good at plot-creation, I would say. None of it seemed out of place or absurd. May you keep writing more and more. The plot is what made me like the series the most.👌👌

I don't know what's more disappointing. This chapter or the fact that this is the last chapter. The only good development is Menaka planning on being Dara's fake wife but it....leads to nowhere.

Please continue this story his wife and old watch man life in 2 months