All Comments on 'Joel and Carrie Ch. 02'

by JoeDreamer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Every mans dream

comitment love and sexual fulfillment no hangups and problems.

Nice dream

ideab418ideab418over 17 years ago
wow...

Keeping up the excellent work

touchetoucheover 17 years ago
great!

Another awesome chapter. Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
nice story

Can't wait for the next one.

I never figured out why morons with hangups feel the need to post stuff on these feedbacks. Probably never will.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
that was nice

wow that was some major booty

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very stimulating

The reader can so easily put himself in the action and recall some of his past experiences. Very enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
damn!!!

man ur getting aton of ass!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
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quentintarantadoquentintarantadoabout 17 years ago
Actually pretty good writing

I could never get the hang of that. Your stories are very fleet, the exchange is natural. That scene in the tub with Rob, Joel, Carrie and Tina was full of suspense, I couldn't guess what was going to happen next. Plus, I like how you put in the psychology of seduction, couples who resist because they are hearing about a new idea and how to wear their resistance down.

Your stories and your philosophy reminds me a lot of Robert Heinlein, especially his stories about Lazarus Long. I'm glad I see you have a lot of stories under your name, I'm going to wade into them now.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 12 years ago

Great chapter Joel and Carrie are made 4 each other

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
this sucks

Total garbage

KhaymarKhaymaralmost 12 years ago
Great story.

You know you're doing something right when you upset the prudes. If they don't like the story then don't read it.

Excellent writing style. Not quite to my taste in sharing department but can't deny that it is well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow!

Just as good as the first!

HardandYoung1896HardandYoung1896almost 11 years ago
Dripping cum!

I LOVE these stories. Christ their so hot.

JiinohJiinohover 8 years ago
Second time

reading it all for the second time and it's quite good indeed!

MartyMBMartyMBover 5 years ago
Fluff

Just my opinion, but I don't see any need for there to be any other males besides Joel. I just don't like competition for Carrie now that she and Joel are together. Comparisons have only hurt relationships, especially new ones.

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