All Comments on 'You Sap!'

by Man Ray

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 17 years ago
A bit ...

standoffish but beautiful imagery.

Let it go my friend.

All hang out and see what picture appears ..

Love your writing and imagery as always

... keep'm coming ~

IrishBayouIrishBayouover 17 years ago
I see...

an acrostic. I see an acronym, ASL. I read a haiku. I see a vulnerable young virgin; the seedling of a flower. I feel the arousal of the male stamen. I see the offspring of their coupling; a pure innocent newborn, the fruit her innocence and his determination. I see this through the beauty of the illustration and the power of the words. Do I need glasses?

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
Thank you...

Rhyme Fairy. Delightful to see you again, it’s been a while. Thank you Irish Bayou. I like your perception.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
A technical comment

Let us see the whole plant!

Please, don't let any part of the plant be left out or cut off the picture.

Other than that, a nice (not without humor) poem.

forest_femmeforest_femmeover 17 years ago
ASL…

seems to me you spend time in chat rooms! Is that like a muse for your frenzied splash of colour and poems?

GoderichGoderichover 17 years ago
JMHO…

a muse? Chat rooms amusing, yes! This is offbeat and campy. I like it.

PopplettePoppletteover 17 years ago
Funny and Pretty

My friend told me to read your poem. It made me smile.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Short, sweet....

with a beautiful picture

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Well crafted haiku on a fine looking illustration.

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
OSMOSIS FOR THEM

diffusion for the others. TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
#2 HORTICULTURAL HUSBANDRY

playing supreme in the chain. TK U MLJ LV NV

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