All Comments on 'Midnight in the Garden of Eva'

An intriguing piece of dream-fiction, nicely portrayed, with enough artistry to overcome any dislike of the subject matter. My first inclination was that you could have expanded the sensory details of the dream, but I then realized you walk the fine line between the realism needed to show the scenario and the over-abundance of detail, which would ruin the dream quality. Very nicely accomplished.

where are you...? Comin'in the back door,evidently! Wild dream sequence, delightfully bizarre, I loved it. Good luck in the contest.

Has been mentioned on The New Story Review thread of the Author's Hangout.

maybe i should go back to bad and see what i dream now...