All Comments on 'White Knighting'

Malvern ? So very close to home and a wonderful place to be 🙂

Can't believe that's your first story here. Great job, love how the story develops. I think she's a great girl, full of character and sounds hot as hell. Hope there's more chapters to come and you don't just dive off in to other completely different stories, I'm invested in her now!

Absolutely loved this!!!!!

This was a truly lovely story, and I hope you keep writing. Great job.

Wonderful 1st story, very much looking for many more. Romance and actual character development. I would give you 10 stars if the system allowed it.

Very good story. Write more.

Great Story hopefully we haven’t seen the last of these two.

I agree and hope there is more to come of Hestor and her knight

Fan-fucking-tastic story. We need more. So, so much more. Hes and Jamie deserve their happy ending!

When I finish a good story I hold the book in my hands to savor the moment. Unfortunately I had a laptop and it isn’t the same. Character development is quite good as are the feelings you transmit to your readers. Jamie is one lucky SOB. Keep up your writing and always proof read a third time; preferably 24 hours after the second read. You rock Rvagirl!

oh my godddddd I love this I love Hester and Jamie I love YOU

I went into it not expecting much but the way you write definitely caught my attention. Especially the way you've characterised Hester. She seems like someone I'd love to hang out with. I adore Hester and Jamie's almost sappy, sweet romance. The sex was delicate and I do appreciate the concept with the tattoo map. Overall the story was clever and didn't overstay its welcome. Keep writing! Would love to see more nylon play in the next one as that's my weakness.

Great story, great writing. Nice to read trans stories 9nbhere where it isn't always a transwoman with the biggest cock ever or her having to blackmail someone.

Also, the Hold Steady is amazing!

Just love this story, you make Jamie into a man that just love a trans woman. I hope you continue this story and Jamie and Hester get married.

Very well done and very well written! Definitely looking forward to more from you, truly enjoyed the story and how you portrayed the characters in your writing, made me feel like I was reading someone's love story!

Holy shit please write more you're so good! <3

Amazing just amazing

I totally loved your story. Please more

This was so good. Love transcends all the extraneous stuff

Excellent. Too many stories in this genre are all BDSM, huge dicks and what I would consider fetishism. Transgendered = human like us all. We all want love. Thanks for a nice sweet story. As a point of reference I am an old straight guy but a great story about human emotions transcends any label we put on ourselves.

Oh but this was lovely. Thank you and welcome to Lit :-)

What an amazing story. The characters, the details (Alan the bulldog) the imagery (he tied a little balloon attached to her heart) the humor (no objectifying the cis boy!) and the hot sex all combined to make this story - no exaggeration- one of the best I’ve read. I’m sad it ends with him leaving, can only hope for a part 2!

“The bright lights of her body” is a turn of phrase I’m never going to stop thinking about. You knocked if out of the park, fam. From one trans girl to another, I don’t know you, but I’m proud of you.

Excellent story, waiting eagerly for your next one!

Thank you for that story!

Wow, that was an amazing story! A true winner in my book. :-)

In a world that is full of wars, and shortages, and hatred and calamities we need stories that take us to a happier place. We end up loving Hester and Jamie and their friends because we need to know life can be a better place if we let it. Rvagirl's sex is fun and hot, simple but eloquent. I loved it. Thank you

Loved this story so much! You're a talented writer and I simply fell in love with Hester and Jamie. The intimacy at the end was so sensual. It touched me in the deepest parts of my soul! Easily one of my favorite stories on this site!

Since this is set in 2017 any chance at a sequel or series picking up in the future? With an epilogue set five years later (now) where they’re together forever.

Beautiful story. I got totally invested in Hester and Jamie. I am an old guy so was taught to love and protect women. I can identify with Jamie. Hester is a wonderful girl. One cpuld only hope for another story from you about them.

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This is adorable and wholesome and I love it so much! I can’t wait to keep reading as you keep writing!

Really beautiful but I want them to be together! 5*

I loved it from beginning to end. I love that it was from Hester's perspective to show who she is and her love for Jamie. I certainly found myself wanting to be more like Jamie too. He's passionate, protective, caring, and a gentleman. I can't wait to see how their relationship thrives and I'm sure Hester is going to Washington DC really really soon. Thanks for sharing your great stories. Sincerely Tim 💕

I’ve read a lot of stories over the years on this site. This one is a standout. Believable, likable characters, good pacing, credible plot, and clear, engaging prose. Thank you for your efforts, RVAGirl. Please keep writing. You are a natural.

This story introduced me to this genre. Looks as if I started with an excellent example.