All Comments on 'The Perfect Mammal'

Hot girl-on-girl action, but would like a bit more time spent on the seduction stage. Seemed rushed and woefully unrealistic to me. But not bad for a first effort.

Can't wait to find out what happens when all your girlfriends come back to the apartment...

A great start. I loved the sex scene, but you need to have more build up. Alot of writers will focus on the sex, but the seduction is even more important.....and if done right it can be even sexier than anything else.

Short, sweet, and to the point. Sometimes that's all you need.

Holly shit Batman!! This is erotica on speed♡

Wow, that was one hot story! Thank you for sharing it with us!