All Comments on 'Carmel's Unsent Letter to Alfred'

Superb story that you so much

Poignant and moving 5

Lovely!

5

Part journal, part letter and the intention was always to put those feelings down on paper so she could hide them away and move on. Touching and sensible. I like her

Very nice way to follow up on Armistice Day, it touches on the story, retelling tiny bits of it, but more importantly, it allows Carmel to express her feelings in her own words. I liked how she was able to express her cleverness and maybe a touch of her own withheld jealousy in this letter that she’d never send at knowing what happened between Alfie and Susannah as Alfie prepared to move on. Finally, the emotion is there on the page even though Alfie will never read it. Great job, 5*

Another winner, not that I'm surprised! Thanks for your contribution to the event!

Very nice account of the emotions of a love deeply felt, but known to be impossible Also I had wondered what happened to Carmel, Susannah and Peter so thank you for the follow up.

One side she was enlightened to “real love real passion “ and so she can hang on some beautiful extraordinary memories …… Loosing a true love is horror, and to overcome and live on is like missing your heart and soul ….. yeah some soul leaving footprints on our souls which cant be polished ….. heartbreaking letter but some happened back in times happen now and will be happen TRAGEDY

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Fuck off Carmel. You and your daughter are both whores