All Comments on 'Ass Virgins'

by XyJonah

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
reminds me

My first sex was delightful anal with my girlfriend of the time. Great story loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
very nice, well written

Very hot, the idea of a girl giving into her desires, letting her boyfriend lead her to try new things. Very believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
HOT

As a woman who loves anal sex for the submissive aspect, this story really turned me on! I'll be back many times. ;)

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisqueover 17 years ago
Congratulations

I thought it was a great first effort.

You have been mentioned in the Aothor's Hangout - New Story Review.

AssObsessedAssObsessedover 16 years ago
Good Stuff

Great story, I love the submissive aspect as much as I love his curiosity. I was a little surprised at the different view the two of them had of him, but then I remembered, that's the way we often are. Just a good tale from start to finish, succinct and tremendously hot, good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
whoa

alli gotta say is wow!

even tho im not much into anal, this story had me so hot!

keep up the great work =)

~X~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
mmm

Im a ass-virgin but very very curious! this has definately told me what ill be doing tonight haha!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Similar

When me and my girlfriend first had anal sex it was very similar to this. Just in my room, and we didn't stop after just one. We now enjoy anal couple times a week, and she read this story with me and is amzed as well at how close it is to our own story

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So it's been 12 years since I last wrote erotica. In that time I've had quite a ride: put my writing to good use, got good, got published and quoted, got jaded. And someone made "Softly..." into a short animated film! When your veins run with words, and your brain constantly ...