All Comments on 'Eat Me'

by 29wordsforsnow

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Bn2fBn2fabout 1 year ago

Yes, an orgasmic feast for ears and eyes.

I could talk about this piece but I’d rather point out that 29 is doing things on here that many aren’t and few, really, are capable of. Truly a well crafted talent.

If you’re not following 29 - what the hell are you waiting for???

jk1982jk1982about 1 year ago

Truly excellent

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowabout 1 year agoAuthor

A big 'Thank You' goes out to Mal_Bey and TheRedChamber for beta-reading and suggesting improvements.

Paul4playPaul4playabout 1 year ago

Wow!

Fun and sensuous!

Excellent! Beautiful! Creative!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

One of the best pieces of erotic poetry I have read. You are very talented and anyone who can use the word corybantic in this genre gets kudos from me. Well written and truly sensual.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

poem feel like of some sort of food. maybe English is my second language, that's why.

FilthyBongWaterFilthyBongWater6 months ago

Alongside the amazing wordplay and accompanying images, I love the physical shape of this poem - so much attention has been put into it

I_AM_ONE_OF_YOUI_AM_ONE_OF_YOU5 months ago

Poetry and the pics supporting them are awesome combo. 👏👏

Well tried, creative and arousing too 😚

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'The world always seems brighter when you've just made something that wasn't there before.' - Neil Gaiman ----- Writing some poetry, and maybe a story, somewhere between light vanilla and dark thorns. Now and then, I throw in illustrations, mostly colored pencils. Somewhere...