All Comments on 'Fickle Fortune'

Mivr

Excellent.

Great story! Hilarious and perfect!

Wow, that was a great burn. I wonder if Hank will divorce Randi now that she has severe medical problems - its happened before. In either case Randi is probably f'd up for the rest of her life. And the name of that bus that ran over her - KARMA!

Another one bites the dust!

5

Wow. You have a deliciously evil mind! Loved it!

5 Stars. Dam good story, nice, unexpected ending, revenge is so sweet.

The ending was the best part of the entire story. 5 stars all day

Nicely done!

Old joke: when is the honeymoon over?

When your in the bathroom shaving.

She comes in to take a shit.

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9

Thanks. Made me smile.

Love it when a plan comes together.

That was really funny.

5*

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Bravo bravo, for all those who worship at the altar of materialism. For all those who will sell their morals, and convictions for wealth. For all those poor saps this story was for you.

Yesiree bob...that's the ticket!

Oi, that was bad, really bad.

He could just have let the cheaters go and lived his life.

That would have been revenge enough as cheaters are bound to cheat again.

Though well-written but the story is just full of spite.

Clever. Instead of physically violent, it was psychically violent. Attached to this comment are two (2) kudos, please keep refrigerated to preserve freshness.

Aww, I would have personally ended it with the lottery ticket "story." I say that because this line is fucking amazing:

"That's right. I walked away from a lot of money and did it for spite so you would get nothing. That's how much I hate you. You and Hank have a nice night now"

I’m sorry if I look like a bad person, but I really really enjoyed this story.

I wish I could give MORE than five stars

The last paragraph was the best part to me. Like the story.

Perfect burn!

Delicious.

Yeah…that was pretty good. But….just no way in hell the guy gives up several hundred million $$$$ just to spite the bitch. Instead…he takes the $$$ and uses it to hire experts to fuck up her life.

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4 ****

The plot was a little too straight forward but I have to give it top score for originality. Very creative idea! 5*

Epic revenge. He targeted her greed and launched a billion dollar bomb right at it.

I realize that every lottery has its own rules.and the author can obviously create their own, but IRL, jackpots only roll-over when they're NOT won. Winning tickets usually have a year to be claimed. I have no idea what happens to prizes not claimed then, but I would imagine that it goes back into the lottery's fund to be distributed to whoever normally gets money from the lottery.

Payback's a bitch. 🤣

MC is a POS. Why do you people write protagonists who are worse than the other characters

Nice! 5*

Excellent. If only I lived in a state with a lottery...

Not only a great story but great to see you writing again. Five stars.

Clever twist. Well done.

well done. no nitpicking from me 4****

Always love a good BTB! Hoping she doesn't recover and hubby can spend some alone time with Tom helping him see the error of his ways!

Nice. Turned out way better than he could have expected. D

Sickly funny!!

LOVED IT!!!!! Thanks for the laugh.

I do not usually go in for BTB stories. This is the exception. A nice twisted mind combined with good writing skills and viola. A lit classic.

Damn, this may be the best BTB ever. LOL

That last paragraph moved this from 4 to 5 stars

That was brilliant! One of the best BtB stories I've ever read on here.

That was great! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

That is brutal! *****

Sweet revenge

4 stars, if the lottery ticket had been real then it would be 5 stars

Fun, thank you

5 stars

A greedy ex wife thinks that she walked away from a big lottery win, what a way to twist the knife a little deeper. Even if it was a fake winning ticket. That is a cruel way to make ones day.

Love it, so fucking evil!

Diabolically funny 5

That was one sick tale. Totally destroying another human for a sick kind of revenge! Those who gave this a high score are part of this crowd of losers ,not human in the least. Shame on you all!

That was fun. I'll never understand a person who puts money ahead of love.

This story is as sick as they come. Tom walks out of the marriage financially intact. Has visitation with son . no issues. No he has to put a zinger into her. A phony lottery ticket and a story from a sick mind. Plus a young healthy women does not have a stroke from this BS. If she had super high blood pressure and other issues and fell for the BS .maybe !! she still moved up. Who would give up a fortune its cut off for nose to spite your face. Yet so many readers here think this is cool.its just inhuman and sick .

5 stars, well done. Your brand of evil tastes so very sweet. Thanks for posting.

Oh, wow! That’s beautiful! I would have loved it even if it was real. If you truly loved someone, when they betray you, then you’re willing to sacrifice anything to utterly destroy them.

ZK

Wow! Very clever and well written.

This was actually funny... until he had a huge grin about his ex turning blind, mute, and being paralized. Things like this make me think the wife might've been right, when she decided to leave the psycho.

Loved it! 5stars

That's what you call revenge, to the max!!! HAHAHAHA!

😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🤭damn😂😂😂😂..

Neat. Tidy, Wish I'd written it! 5*

Talk about knowing your target... Wow! Short, simple, well-written, and spot-on perfect! 5/5!

Damn, that was righteous

Lovely revenge, well done!!!!!

5/5

The stroke was an unlikely consequence for the work it took Hubby to generate that stunt. Even if Hubby may have known about Asshole’s dinner (thus Sweetie’s blood pressure). Certainly, the extent of her damage (sufficient to change kid’s custody) would be as unlikely as … well … as Hubby winning the lottery… which he didn’t! It is called the “cross your fingers as you walk around the ladder and toss some fish-stick chunks towards the black cat which was going to walk in front of your path!”

Good setup, finish is way too far out! As the story is concluded, Sweetie probably cannot appreciate her loss of motherhood, anyway, and Asshole will just rent an escort!

4*

Ha!

That was a good idea for a plot.

Give the slut a kick in the ass.

What could be more satisfying?

Kudos Griscom.

It's good to know we have writers among us

with class.

And Griscom is one of them.

Top ratings from me.

Thanks I enjoyed this!

GREAT. Thanks.

Holy Fuck! Amazing

Brilliant!

That was delicious!

Absolutely perfect!!! Thanks for sharing

Well played; well played indeed!

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Clever!!!

Oooh, a dark price for a ladder climbing sloot

Perfect! Can’t think of a better way to BTB. 🤣

Nasty little story. Loved it. 5*

best btb ever. one stone two birds. Burn the Bi*** and Burn the Bas****

A very novel revenge. Loved it! 4*

Nicely done. Not realistic but a fun read. Thanks! 5 stars

I really enjoyed this short story. What she longed for, she didn't get just because of the urge to get it. Well, and of course it was brutal, but he didn't know she would react so violently.

Definitely an original!! LMAO

Ooooh...

...this was SO nasty.

And SO good !

5/5

Very funny. Thanks for something new.

Wicked twist. I loved it.

That was hilarious. Made me laugh, and was well written. 5 stars.

Hit it out of the park. Excellent, new, creative and fun!!!

Got to admit, I loved it. Mrs. Bear is giving me strange looks and says I'm sick. Beautiful revenge. 5 stars, keep them coming.

The BEAR

Ohh, lovely jubberly, great twist.

And the going is good

For everyone calling Tom a bastard, consider this;

Got his kid back and sent two greedy monsters to the shadow realm with a fake lottery ticket, therefore, he did nothing wrong and is totally right to smile and laugh

(besides no way he knew about that medical condition and Hank seems like a lousy husband, I hope that by taking care of his wife that changes)

That was epic…well done.

Bwahahaha! Great story, what a way to BTB!

Great Story,

I really enjoyed this story, I don't know how I've missed your stories before, but after reading this I've read all 21 of your tales and enjoyed them all. Some more than others, although they were all good..

However, sadly I have to agree with some other readers that some stories are a little too short.

Not a complaint more of an observation..

Ohhh, what a tangled web we weave, when we practice to be a self absorbed, Narcissist bitch!

5 stars!

Funny. Just too damn funny.

Devious sadism. Loved it.

And this story was part of BTB? Clever but what a waste! This is Literotica and that initself has a certain criteria being clever is not all of it. Wish I could give you zero!

5 Star story is Perfect

‘Nuff said. Thanks for writing!

What a clever twist! Thanks for writing!