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MUST CHECK THE SPELLINGS ITS SEMEN NOT SEAMEN

brilliant

Your mispelling of the word SEMEN reminded me of an old joke I heard back in High School:

Q: What's long, hard, and full of...oh, you know!! ;))

A: A submarine!!

(All right, a little juvenile I reckon, but hey! It was wicked funny back in 9th. grade!)

You story is interesting but marred by poor spelling or wrong word choice:

"semen" as in seminal fluid not "seamen" (sailor)

"you're" (you are) not "your" (belonging to you)

"although" is one word not "All though"

On the plus side you seem to know the difference between to and too.

Deliciously brilliant, well written. Searching for next installment.

Great story. We have all had accidents and dreams.