All Comments on '"OH, S..T, NOT YOU!"'

The sh.t did indeed hit the fan! LMAO royally.

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ good one Bear!

shit gonna hit the fan

Good one, Bear! Thanks for writing!

A good story. 4 stars.

Soooo bad, but so right at the same time. Perfect

Had great potential. I hate when incomplete stories are published. Please, only publish completed stories.

Good karma start 4*

Waiting for part two.

I remember reading the story this started as. Does anybody remember that story?

When they took her rings off I would have beat them to death . If my wife and I were approached with an offer like this I would have called the cops.

Not sure what to say about this, it started with a good plot but seemed to change at the end.

Men plan and god laughs, Karm really has a sense of humor also! Good one. Seems daddy didn't tell the wife where he would really be!

I would love to see a version of this where the husband didn’t get to leave or have another woman and the wife was with someone other than her father.

Just to see the emotions and turmoil the husband felt.

But I’m also interested in seeing how this version turns out.