All Comments on 'Holiday Help'

Sweet, and I like the bossy but kind style of Audrey.

Good premise.

The buildup to sex was fine.

Nice blowjob. Nice pussy-eating.

But the anal was a waste. Much too quick. No touching her asshole. No fingering her asshole. Certainly no tongue action involving her asshole.

Grease. Cock in ass. Boom.

And the story was classified as 'Anal", but the anal was the least erotic sex they had.

Three stars.

Nice story! I loved the interaction between the characters along with the build up towards the sex. I have to say, they must be a second chapter. You cannot leave us hanging with Audrey asking at the end of the story, "Do you have handcuffs? What are your thoughts about role play?"

Great story, Woman changes man. man happy

Love it! Very good chemistry between these too, hot scenes as well. Hoping for a part 2.

well written..as well as erotic.

She sure got to the bottom of things!

5

I want part 2 see where they go from there

Actually cogently written, good character development and chemistry, no misogyny or stupidity, hot sex. This was readable, enjoyable story, a low bar that not even half of the shit on here clears. Very nice

Excellent. Well-written and fun to read. A chapter 2 would be nice. Thanks.

Loved it! The storyline was great and honestly seemed possible. Very well done.

Brilliant story. Absolutely loved it.