All Comments on 'A Little Love'

I found this to be a very beautiful story.

It was very well written, and believable. The building interaction between the characters especially the antagonistic ones helped bring the story to the honest ending. It left me wanting to know more about Zoe's and Addy's future together.

A Big Love. You did a great job writing this emotional longing and hopeful tale of love. There is someone for everyone no matter what challenges.

Being a romantic myself, your story gave me a real warm feeling. The real love between two people is the most beautiful thing there is next to the love for your children. It's heartwarming to see that real lovestories are still being written. Too many dull "sex-stories" for the sake of "sex only" (that are not even erotic) appear on Literotica or other sites. Guess that shows the shallow society we live in nowadays. Congratulations for a very well written story. I could have cried. G.Belgium.

Lovely short (sorry about that!) story! A story in which the focus is really the universality of human emotion — desire, love, stupidity and fears. Sex is just the icing on the cake, and presented in a positive manner. Bravo!

I thought your other stories were good - then I read this one. One of the best stories I've ever read. Different approach, it really was a beautiful, lovely and touching story. You have a real talent for writing.

I thought the dialogue was spot-on, and made the entire story realistic.

i have read quite a few stories on here but this is defo. the best! It was tender and not all about sex, it showed how some people are made for each other - i loved it.

Such a well written story - loved it !!

Well written; a very nice read.

Loved the story! Very well written love story.

what more can i say? well done!

Just beautiful. Your story brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.

So sweet!!

Loved it to death!!

this was too sweet :)

THANK YOU FOR SHOWING THAT IT DOESNT MATTER WHO OR WHAT YOU R U CAN STILL FIND LOVE...

what a great little story. thanks so much for sharing! please keep making more

This was beautiful. Thank you.

Outstandingly well written, your story will read well even if edited for general publication (non erotic). You should pursue this it has legs and could go far.

Anyone who can include a mention of West Ham United into an erotic story gets my vote.... Well played my son !!!

A wonderful story showing that feelings overcome all other things

love will conquer all those and more, TK U MLJ LV NV

This is a gorgeous piece. I've never read anything in this genre that's actually brought tears to my eyes before, and your work did it. I agree with one of the other comments you recieved-- a bit of tweaking and I could see this getting published.

Very well paced. Good dialog. And the love and sex is believable.

honestly, i stumbled over this jewel looking for something lotr-ish, but i couldn´t be happier with what i found instead. what a sweet story! and her beating up that a#hole was jsut priceless ;-)

Amazing. Simple as that.

There is one hole however. Damn it! Ask that sweet baby to marry you!

A VERY nice story. Any chance for a “Part 2”?

I really enjoyed this story! As a little person myself and i can identify in situations and feelings. Thank you for waiting a realistic story with a little person instead of sci-fi or fantasy that's full off shit! Please write a part two

Thoroughly enjoyed this work, as I have several others of yours.

Sensitively written and believable.

I have difference story then.

I was 19 when I had phone call which is a misspelled one. But I had this called after a period again and our phone calls have been extended to hours. After that I told my real situation and ask her to meet. Shee agreed and met near her town. But when she saw me, she went away. And I was desperate and my whole faith in girls vanished and decided to be alone for the rest of my life.

Anyone who reads this work that don't fall in love with Zöe just has no compassion for this sweet little woman (LOVE). She stole my heart while i was reading the piece. I guess I’m like others who have commented on this piece that I would like to see a follow on to this work to see what further activities the author may have in mind. Some more of their lovemaking would definitely be in order. She gave him oral and I think that it was a shame that he didn't reciprocate that act for her. Of course that can taken care of in the follow on piece so that the reader can observe her reaction to that act of love.

What an absolutely lovely story!

Sweet

Liked her clobbering the asshole...