All Comments on 'A Wedding Day Conversation'
by Jalibar62
- 32 Comments
UpperNorthLeft3 months agoA very sweet story. It’s hard to convey a complete and satisfying story arc in just 750 words. I think you nailed it. 5*
Anonymous3 months agoAs the song goes " there must be a cloud over my head rain keeps falling from my eyes "
inka22223 months agoMeh. It was well written but I deeply and passionately hate this garbage man-hating notion that a man mist ONLY love one woman all his life even if she's not around, and can't love anyone else. MC needs grief therapy, not adoration.
jamesapple3 months agoI was okay with the story until the next to last line. That made this a 5 star story. Well done.
Tx77Tumbleweed3 months agoVery few 750 word stories manage to reach a 4 in my opinion. This one was 5+ stars.
Anonymous3 months agoMemo to inka2222. Your only hope is therapy, but it’s probably too late for you
Anonymous3 months agoWell written, but a bit farfetched. Billions of women in the world and not one to build some semblance of a relationship with?
EastCoaster13 months agoWow.
This was SO good... a complete story I'm only a few well-chosen, well-utilized words, carrying meaning of such weight and emotion...
There was no score possible than five stars, IMHO.
VERY well done.
Anonymous3 months agoJust his illusions, or an actual presence. We don't care. At the end we are just happy that both share it.
Anonymous3 months agoBullseye in my soft spot. I’m’a sucker fo such things. Five mon, cheers.
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Anonymousabout 2 months agoOh for heavens sake what an absolute masterpiece of a story. This really is an absolute flawless diamond of the art of writing. To put this much emotion into a short story is just brilliant. Thank you for this gift. BardnotBard
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