All Comments on 'My Beautiful Bride'

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StrappySandalsStrappySandals3 months ago

A stupid tale, but an interesting premise… Big Black Cock lover concocts story to get herself some Big Black Cock!!

Ridiculous69Ridiculous693 months ago

There should be a stronger cuck and wimp warning. Another story glorifying wife becoming a slut and personifying hubby as a weak and worthless loser.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Easily twice as long as was needed. Also, it was too obvious why she couldn't have children. A 1 was too high for this rubbish.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Interested more in the comments than the story - Apart from the initial betrayal, it is not mentioned that Sharon is interested in black cock. Caribbean islands are not exclusively populated by black men, so who knows who she chose?

Why would you need a cuck/wimp warning? What are you scared of?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

WTF? MC has 30 yrs, the good 30 yrs at that, taken from him by a absolute piece of shit human being with no remorse aka whore wife and scum limo driver, never able to have family and all he gets in the end is to fuck a 67 yrs old woman. As I said in the begging, WTF?

NicealloverNicealloverabout 1 month ago

There was no remorse for love lost. Shall we believe that Sharon was so shallow that 30 years of marriage after marrying her childhood sweetheart was replaced only with lust for black lovers. It left me feeling unsettled.

AnonymousAnonymous10 days ago

"Why would you need a cuck/wimp warning? What are you scared of?"

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Maybe it would be a quick shortcut leading to the rating section.

AnonymousAnonymous9 days ago

Bad ending. MC should have bound his wife and then invited Leon in, where he would have seen her and recognized her as MC drove a knife deep into his gut so he would die slowly and painfully, making his wife watch Leon die. Then he would tell her she was going to join her lover forever, and slowly painfully slit her throat and made her look into his eyes as her life ended, making sure the final words she ever heard were “You cheating cunt of a whore.

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Just offloading some thoughts, based on experiences, fantasies and other folks tales. I'm no writer and am not trying to become one - I just like to make up stories, usually based on either my, or my partners experiences and share them for your delectation. I do the writing, b...