All Comments on 'A Most Indecent Proposal'

Thanks for submitting this hot story.

Not bad.

Good, well written erotic story-very realistic

This was a top-notch tale: highly erotic, well-paced and very realistic. Your narrator's gradual seduction was deftly handled, and I look forward very much to reading more of your submissions.

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This was quite good - but what on earth was going on at the start? The writing, the spelling, the language - it was all absolutely godawful, and then, CLICK, everything was fine. I imagine there'll be many that will give up before the improvement.

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Great story, and not too sound weird but I really liked the last paragraph.

I've just finished reading your great story, and was horrified by the twits who commented in such negative ways.

Where do these deluded fools come from?

Lets face it, they come to this site to read stories which they feel are erotic.

They choose a category and away they go.

After cumming all over their fists, they then try to deny why they were here, by pretending they really only read these stories for their literary content as far as spelling and correct use of English is concerned.

Here's some facts for you liars, it's bloody difficult to write an erotic story, let alone spell it correctly, when you're typing with one hand and wanking with the other, lol.

I loved your story, I was able to see each of the characters and imagine all you described, as if I were in the room with them.

I did all that and wanked at the same time, so as far as I'm concerned, there was absolutely no need for any criticism of your excellent work.

Let's face it, we are all here to get aroused... and I did.

I loved it!

Must agree with the two previous comments. It was pretty damn good! Don't worry about the morons who have no imagination but have nothing to do but belittle yours, your story was well handled. More please!

Fantastic, sensual, erotic stoty.....well done.

Tess was really cold to Shane when they kissed she should realized it was the same passion as his wife. I just wish they would had some alone time together like his wife did with her but now years later she's still a stuck up bitch.

Yes, I've found it best that the wife is the one to first seduce the babysitter. More exciting and much less creepy than for the husband to initiate.

Kidding aside, a very good story.

Thanks

The sex scenes where hit and the entire situation was erotic. Thank you

A chapter in ones life relived, memories are so precious. Regards NF in UK

Nice.