All Comments on 'I Am'

Wow.

Absolutely stunning!! Really incredible!

Change your past tense (led) to present tense in your 4th line. That's a continued sentence with changing tenses.

Otherwise, this piece is absolutely perfect and certainly one of your best efforts. Repetition is a key poetic element here. I'm impressed how you use it, and I like following your focus... your poetic mind's eye. You take me somewhere, and I like to travel.