All Comments on 'Modern Fairy Tales Ch. 02'

I loved it. I think it's one of the best things you've written! The scene of poverty you painted was so indicative of rural life I really felt like I was in the story. And it had a happy ending. Perfect!

Wonderful addition to the chain. Well done!!

this one shows the reason why. Just the right amount of everything mixed in to make it a wonderful read. Great job.

Amazing tale! Probably the longest story I've read on this site, but it was worth every page!

I couldn't believe the page numbers when I started (8 pages!) but they FLEW by! This was an amazing modernization of the tale, a wonderful amalgam of fairy tale and reality. Truly awe-inspiring. I'm loving this chain!

This is an absolutely wonderful retelling, with the perfect twist on the elements of the original. I agree, this is one of your best.

Loved this story! Especially the end when dear mama gets what she deserved.

You took a classic fairytale and turned it into a dark, sexy, and scary modern fairytale. With a happy ending. Just the way all fairytales should end

A very creative story. Some of it was quite disturbing but very creative just the same. I found it a little too long but I know with the chain story you can't break it up into chapters.

Well written as others have related, however, I would have liked more sex between the twins with all the erotic details. In contrast to most of the other comments, I'd have preferred more arousing details and less plot. This is, after all, LitEROTICA.

I loved this retelling of the classic.

this was very hot

No! No! No! You bloody bleating pervert!

Kind of odd, but I liked it, with a very nice ending.

It's about time that at least some bitches in this world can taste their just desserts.

Where's Ch. 01??

Well done. This was a very good read.

I stopped reading your story after page 2. I cant imagine my giving another person giving her head or even a kiss