All Comments on 'Maxwell's Demon Ch. 15-21'

The story is good, but the people in it are stupid. Jennifer started something monumentally idiotic and then the rest just keep going in that direction.

I sincerely hope that someone will wise up, and that Kasey will make it home.

Great story, I am getting used to your writing style. Realism and straight to the point. The culture gap between aliens and humans, the mishaps when applying new technology. It's everything one can expect from a story called Maxwells Demon.

Great story getting better by the episode.

You've got some good ideas and I like the character development. Slow but sure!

Keep going until you get a good finish please!!