by blackfen
2025 And Friends is on tv? Must be Nick's tvland reruns.
I'm pleased you're continuing writing the story within days wait.
I'll reserve comments until chapter 03.
Will we have a scene similar to a certain time traveler named Calvin Klein who regains conscience and says "mom.. your.. your so BIG!"
Thanks,
Andy
Loved this story, as well as part 1. Part 3 SOON, please!!
why a genius father gave birth to such a slow retard? why bother using a time machine to go back in time and fuck your mother, when you could just walk in to her bedroom, no more than a couple feet away? <p>
the time machine is to be used to go back to watch roman gladiators, the building of the great walls, the erecting of the great paramids, or the great herds in the great rift valley before the spoils of man, etc.
but he's gonna use his daddy's machine to go back in time and fuck his mother, when she masturbating in a room no more than a couple feet away from his, yelling "Fuck me, fuck me deep with your cock!" <p>
what a complete time wasting dick beating little imbecilic retard! <p>
please, dear author: create another character; have him go back in time and demand the mothe abort this stupid retarded narrator of this current story of yours/his!
Love it. Please don't stop, its pretty original and reminds me alot of georgetaskers old stories.
Jamie better think about what he is thinking of doing because if he does go back to the time when his mom was a teen ager and keeps her from marrying his dad he wont exist and he wont exist as he does in the future he better think very hard about that if he wants to come back .
Atlanta,Ga
Easy to read and interesting. Thanks.......Rich
I THINK WHAT THIS STORY NEEDS IS A DOC BROWN TO TAKE OVER THE TIME MACHINE, AFTER DAD DIES IN A LAB MISHAP .MOM CRIES ,SON TO THE RESCUE . BY THE WAY HE FUCKS MOM WITH HIS 12 INCH COCK. IF WE ARE DREAMING LETS DO IT BIG. YOUR GETTING LOST AND OFF THE TRACK. THINK OF THE FINAL OUT COME. BEFORE YOU TRY TO FINISH. HE FUCKS MOM KNOCKS HER UP, REMEMBER BACK IN TIME NO BIRTH CONTROL. NOT TOO MUCH THOUGH IN THIS STORY............LAROC OF AGES
About the only thing we readers have been able to garner from this story is, that son Jamie is in love with his dick, and his conveniently spying on his fabulous mother!
Of course, with "perception being reality" who knows what might eventually occur between the owner of such a "well loved dick" and his mother.
My opinion is, or at least I get the feeling, that Jamie might "put the strong arm" on his mother in order to display his imagined "manhood"!
What's with this guy and his constant reminder of "my big cock". What kind of big dick phobia does this guy have?
Love this story. Your descriptions of the "activities" are very stimulating to say the least. It's one thing I've noticed in everything you write.
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