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by arisingsiren

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BunnySanguineBunnySanguine28 days ago

Well done, Siren.

DampKittenDampKitten24 days ago

There's definitely an art to giving. I really like this piece.

Tail_GunnerTail_Gunner19 days ago

really nice ...

... we will be expecting more !

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take care, stay safe levi coldwater

MigbirdMigbird7 days ago

Discovered your work through reading another author; glad for that. Very moving, thought provoking erotic poem. Loved the “turn” and the complementary nature of your lines around strengths and weaknesses. Beautiful poem.

Tail_GunnerTail_Gunner5 days ago

Thanks for your ‘comment’ re: Red Wine … No Panties” !

… there are many ways to enjoy sex with a really fine woman.

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Take Care, Stay Safe. Levi

arisingsirenarisingsiren4 days agoAuthor

Thank you for the kind words, everyone.

Our 69-word arrangement was fun.

Two stanzas of six lines became sublime,

Like “turning” my weakness slowly into a nine.

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I’m Arising Siren. I write descriptive fiction, and where there’s time, I tend to make it rhyme. I’m creating another fantasy, and it should be ready shortly. What’s in the production? Here’s an introduction. Arising Siren travels across time through memories and enters th...