by AsheCollins
It was a very sweet and cute story. It feels like it was a bit more "real" than a lot of fetish stories. I look forward to seeing more of your work, especially if they're based in reality.
Wow, thanks for the nice comments folks! I've got my next story queued up and will upload it in the coming days, hopefully this next one won't take as long to be approved.
Great job! You have a true talent for writing! Please either keep this story going, write another one.
Wow! Hot story! I can confirm, it's great to get fucked by your woman. My wife is doing it regularly with me and I LOVE IT!
Really fun and hot. I appreciate that he didn't get off the first time. A little realism makes it that much hotter. Great entry. Keep writing!
Every couple should at least try it, you know the guy wants to try it!!! Hot story, waiting for part 2
I've really enjoyed seeing your comments and receiving your feedback. It's a wonderful enticement to keep writing, if you'll keep reading!
Really liked the Subject matter. I think a few things could have been worked on and/or flowed a bit more smoothly, but those didn't really detract from the story. Overall really liked it. Looking foreword to more!