All Comments on 'A Private Bath'

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MRayWatcherMRayWatcher17 days ago

Good beginning, but it begs for more.

ThraceBThraceB8 days ago

This is nice... a slow rambling narrative of a girl unwinding... what? after a hard day's work? Who knows? But that's what's nice about the story... it has depth and atmosphere, yet it's amorphous, breezy, and a slice of life and time from somewhere... Hokkaido?

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