All Comments on 'Dark Love'

Dark Kitten loves the feeling

Of an arse hook, inserted deep

Inside her tight back passage

Discomfort makes her weep.

And when her dainty nipples

Are clamped really tight and flat

Her cunt juice starts to well and flow

Her pain ensures that.

Her body's bound secure and tight

She can hardly move

Then her lover's cock, so thick, so hard

Starts to push into her groove.

Pain is pleasure; pleasure's pain

Dark Kitten knows this is true

So she suffers gladly, in silence

Till she cums and her ordeal is through.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Very beautiful and sexy to read :D

Break me til I bend. Genius.

WOW ... a fellow Mississippian ( I -- however-- moved on decades ago. )

... This a little 'hard' for my taste ... still, your talent as a writer is obvious! ... keep up the good work

... ... thanks to Melimelissa for steering me in your direction!

....................... take care, stay safe Levi Coldwater

"Incandescent seed." Wow.

I felt a slow-burning suspense on this one. *****

WOW!! intense 😍

The deep emotional power of this poem is stunning.

You have bared your naked submission on many levels.

Superb arousing erotic writing.

Thank you for exposing your intimate authentic carnal craving.

Very well done. Thank you.

Whose darkness is really satisfied? Clear you love erotic poetry — this piece a perfect example. Tempted to say I enjoy your poetry more than your prose, but will not do so. Continue to share both.