All Comments on 'Eye of the Appreciator'

Amazing story. I loved it. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work. ^__^

Good slow burn, gets hotter in stages. Mom/Son romances usually don't ring true but this does much better than most. I don't know if the Sandra interludes help the story. Only a few funny words, like envelope for envelop (noun vs. verb).

Very good first post.

Awesome one. Wish this had comes from moms pov. It will be super hot then.

Amazingly erotic and sensual, fantastic story, more please.

Beautiful one. Long stories are always hot. Keep writing. Can you write this from moms pov. It will be super hot. Moms reluctance, cuckold and pregnancy gives the super hot stories.

Great first story, like the characters and the sex is hot.

Well done 5 stars

We can only hope that future submissions by you are as soul & lust stirring. Riveting premiere.

Beautifully written and really hot. Thank you

About those “Interludes”

They seemed to break up the flow of this story. I understand why you wrote this way, it just seemed to

be a bump in the road. I can’t think of a different way to move things along. The story was great, you don’t

need another chapter; you’ve conveyed your message.

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Now write more!

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Excellent! Please do write more!

We have a new Alwayswantedto inspired writer! Well done. Keep finding your own style.

An absolute fantastic first story. Hope to see more in the future

This is a perfectly-paced and poignant love story between a mother and son, and I truly hope you'll continue to write more stories of the same nature. You certainly have a talent for it!

Absolutely wonderful story. Your writing style is reminiscent of alwaywantedto and I love that. Probably one of the best stories I have read from a writer's first story. Hopefully you'll keep writing more.

The tension was wonderful, the allure is a great part of eroticism.

Long read...but definitely worthwhile!!!

Great story. I love the way Maria sounds when she's getting fucked by Tyson! 5 Stars

Loved this sizzling story of mom son lust and love. I love the real feel to this story as the son becomes aware of his mothers beauty but also of his fathers lack of attention to matters in the bedroom. I love how the story evolves into the sons pursuit and moms initial resistance. As mom slowly surrendered to her sons advances what starts as French kissing and heavy petting quickly turns into full grinding and fingering. As mom feels her son harden in her presence she once again feels sexy and desirable. As the son continues to press the envelope both mom and son discover the kink of playing with each other in dads close proximity. I love that mom was resistant to let her son actually fuck her..even going so far as sucking his cock and swallowing his cum. As the story evolved we find mom ultimately surrenders to her son and not only lets her son fuck her but to do so unprotected and fill her unprotected womb with his seed over and over again. I love the reminders of how wrong it is for her son to be touching his mother even as she helps him remove her panties and then lays back on the bed and spreads her thighs. I loved that even after the son moves out mom spends the night in her sons apartment as the continue their elicit affair. I hope there is a part two where mom discovers she is pregnant and a few months into her pregnancy dad discovers the loving pair. Instead of being upset, dad becomes excited and completes this happy family tale by watching his now pregnant wife service their son,

Great writing! Slow. Believable. Best in depth writing about the mother that I’ve read in a long time. Her risk taking as sexual motivation was excellent. Thanks!

This story is hot in soo many places. I loved that it brought 2 mons together with their sons. The little push that it takes to get over the thought incest in horrible. Great fantastic story.

First, I have to agree.. the interlude broke the flow of the story. Nonetheless the slow burn was one of the best i have ever red.. omg.. amazing.. The climax and sex felt short, could be much longer and more detailed.. Still 5/5