All Comments on 'Plans'

Very sad!

5

Very sad, I agree...but also very touching.

Beautifully poetic. I've lost two loves of my life, I know. thanks

Damn, so sad

Wow. Well written and very thoughtful. Thank you.

"There's no crying in erotica!"

Achingly sad, yet beautiful.

*cries*

Heartfelt

I love this. Such pain, but such beauty. I truly don’t have words for this. Thank you so much.

That was a hard read .So very sad !

Thank you

Wow. Thank you

Reply to Monagamous_Now. There is crying now. Short and sweet

Thank you

Perfect!

PERFECT 👌

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Magnifico!

11/10!!!!!

A romantic tear jerker.... just the right length so that you didnt need unnecessary character development or plot lines... they are unspoken and for the immagination of the reader

That was beautiful. Thank you for sharing your story. Oof - those tears sting a bit.

Just WOW.

Beautifully written. Few yet powerful words, letting the reader fill in their own thoughts and emotions. I cried and can’t stop thinking about these characters

DAMN fine story.

You were not the only one who created at the end. You must have suffered more than i, because you were invested in the characters and I was only interested in thrm.

Thanks

Crap! (exclamation of how I feel, not description of story). Well written but I don’t want reality. I have to live with it every day. It’s just nice to read ‘happily ever after’ every once in a while. LM

What was this! So disappointing after your previous storey. ⭐️⭐️

Never write a story in present tense, please. Following that suggestion alone will raise your scores.

WOW so much and this provoked so many thoughts, scenes.