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Wark2002Wark200228 days ago

Very well done. The phrasing actually reminds me of some of the more well-known Ancient Egyptian poetry, with a nice, modern edge. This is probably the best you have done on this site. Keep up the good work!

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New here! Aspiring dark fantasy romance author interested in exploring some fun erotic writing on the side. Might make a social media dedicated to this. Not sure yet, but starting here for now to see where it goes.