by Androgynousother
Welcome back Androgynousother, We've missed you!
A good story with more of your slipped-in social and political comment (Kwasi's old boss was Crispin Odey, traitorous profiteering B*****d, betting against his own country for profit!), with plenty of your great characters and dialogue; more please.
It's a good one-off. There are a couple of typos, but nothing significant. Come v cum for one.
Loved it, back in the day I read a lot about the industry but decided I clearly wasn't endowed enough for front of camera or willing to give up a paying job to work behind the camera.
Axelotto
Excellent!
I _would_ have liked to see more with Harriet than just a statement, but it's YOUR story!
5-stars
Nice premise. The kind of people you'd like to know, and have sex with;-) Some of the histrionics over plot holes and grammar are over the top. You wrote this for fun, I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you will continue.
Be well and Happy,
Paul