All Comments on 'The First Time'

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EkphrasisEkphrasis17 days ago

A wonderful debut. Brava, Tracey...xxxxxx Jeanne

Partyof1Partyof115 days agoAuthor

Thanks Jeanne. xxx

There were a couple of passages I thought were good and the rest about 70% okay. I was going to spend longer on it but thought it would make a good starting point if I wanted to do more.

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