All Comments on 'Pleasures of the Flesh'

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arisingsirenarisingsiren23 days ago

Nice tempo.

I can feel the rhythmic pulse.

“Her skin glows rosy, flushed with exertion,

Hair matted and wild from thrashing contortions”

..my favorite part.

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Happily married, but got a naughty side. Love to write poetry. Love watching people. Here for the giggles and company. Always happy to chatter. Make love not war.