All Comments on 'The Cherry Poppers Ch. 13'

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SwitcherySwitcheryabout 16 years ago
Word choice

Nice work, but watch your vocab.

I think the word you were looking for is 'anonymous' not 'unanimous'. There were a few other examples too.

Keep up the good work though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Unanamous, NO.

The word you are looking for is ANONYMOUS. Simple enough mistake to make, though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good read

It was a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
ANOTHER 5 STARS

Nearing the halfway point in this series and BlewWater is still thinking up new and interesting scenarios and twists. And new interesting girls. And removing girls (eg Lana) or neutralizing them (eg Stefanie and Pam) after their cherries are popped in order to pave the way for new virgins for the contest, although Beth and Sheila are as yet still unresolved.

Way to go (or cum).

Paul in Oklahoma

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