by Willow Rain
This is a pretty poem. But I'm a bit greedy for something more, like your Slow Cellar Door. When I read Sleep Beauty, I realized that this beauty was a dark beauty instead of the stereotypical ivory-skinned one. So that got me to thinking how interesting it would be for you to write another poem and go a little deeper with the nontraditional sleeping beauty theme. Just an idea.
The anon comment is mine. Not sure how I got signed out. But now you have two comments on your poem. :)